So glad someone filled this one! Especially with so much attention paid to the humiliation, objectification, and masochism elements, I really appreciate that you nailed those pieces of it.

I feel like third person is great when you want to get in both people's heads, but first person can be easier when writing about two men because otherwise you end up having to repeat their names a lot to clarify which "he" you mean.

I think you made the right move with the less comedic safeword but I also support them changing it for the future because Reginald is too nice a name to be off-limits.