I'm so picky about fics because I want them to be very realistic but also better than realism at the same time. The best possible version of reality, I guess? Because all my favorite fics have some distinct element of imperfection/idiosyncrasy. There needs to be fumbling or awkwardness or apprehension or miscommunication or something. Or a character has a strange quirk or kink that's weird but somehow still hot. I want it to be like really good low-budget amateur porn, not glossy overdone pro studio porn. It takes me out of the story when the characters are all impossibly fit with gigantic cocks that get instantly hard and the sex is always the pinnacle of perfection.
It takes me out of the story when the characters are all impossibly fit with gigantic cocks that get instantly hard and the sex is always the pinnacle of perfection.
Personally I'm a fan of big cocks but the instant hardness is something to ponder. Especially if the man is older, or nervous.
One story I'm doodling on off to one side has Jeeves upset and so he's flaccid. It takes a fair amount of hand work from Bertie to get it hard. Because that happens and I find it hot.
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(Anonymous) 2019-07-08 02:15 pm (UTC)(link)Personally I'm a fan of big cocks but the instant hardness is something to ponder. Especially if the man is older, or nervous.
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(Anonymous) 2019-07-08 05:56 pm (UTC)(link)I like them small. Not tiny but smaller than the average and I'm a huge fan of responsiveness so I'm into the quickly arousable type.